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Balare

We sprinkle stardust on each day

spread joy through nightly dream,

love grows in oh ! so many ways

expanding ever, seems

to welcome shared perceptions, beam

leaves haze maze, finds 'amaze !'

 

We sprinkle sunshine on each night

delight thread through day's fray,

light filters through as wings for flight

disperse Past's grey dismay,

thus day through day and night through night

we grow, glow, flow, sow, stay

united as true team whose trip

from alpha to omega

shows heart to heart clasp lip to lip

as every day more eager

sees shared advance which shall nor slip

nor fret should scope seem meager.

 

Infinite opportunity

succeeding days provide,

as happiness, community,

two heads, twinned hearts allied,

ignores external unity

discovers joy inside.

Author notes

Balare : Italian - to dance

Background : Anu
http://flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2644160666/

Two halves for one bloom pic
http://www.nikonsmallworld.com/images/gallery2005/fullsize/5224_GERANIUM_FLOWER.jpg



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  • sOuL gold member
    July 19

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    everything is there
    the pictures
    the background
    the poem
    the great style
    and all the elements that needed to make it a superb poem
    i really enjoyed reading it
    but the fonts are little disturbin
    if you feel the same then you can change it

  • French Tries
    July 16

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    Infinite opportunities are held in one whole,
    One step into the dance, and you are shining forth
    From Alpha to Omega are linked every hope.
    As in a circle, of dark and light deep source,
    Hands in hands team creating a dance in round.
    Joy and horizon bright succeed days after nights
    When from this inside source they both of us surround.

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  • albymyheart gold member
    July 12

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    A beautiful dance stepped in time to the rhythm of a love so unique. You show love in all its harmony and orchestra. Thank you for the ride...alby

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  • Xqzt
    July 9

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    Neat!

    It dances for me, altho an oceanic theme could be better suited to the image perhaps. I feel more sunsine from yr words than the swaying kelps I (hopefully) portrayed.

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  • Lily otv
    July 9

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    It is lovely how you bring night into day and day into night with the use of stardust and sunshine in the first two stanzas of this poem to show that all time blends into itself where feelings of love are concerned, providing ample opportunity for happiness A truly beautiful notion

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  • Outstanding

    This is one of the best backgrounds I have seen at allpoetry and the poem is thoughtful and positive seeing all that is good in life. This is an uplifting poem that seeks unity and delights in life. Best of luck in the contest.

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  • Piccola gold member
    July 8

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    lovely. Tha background is amazing except for how it tiles at the bottom. I have that problem with my backgrounds and don't know how to fix it.
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