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ruined forever

i dont know what to do except to take my life
it will be so much easier to grip the knife
i still wish you was here
at least in my dreams you would be there
standing by my side
but im sorry i still died
i know you didnt love me or want us togather
you gave it a chance but i would of rather
not known you but you hurt me so much
i would like to have had one last touch
of your beautiful face
but now i cannot escape this place

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  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX silver member
    July 22

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    awww this is another great write. u have a talent and u put alot of heart ane emotion into your work. so great wirte!
  • Feircely Odd
    July 12

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    this is like, so freakin mucho sad!!! there's so much emotion, it made me want to cry!
    this is a very good write!!! thanks so much!!!

    ~kassie