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Sugar-Coated Words

you wish he didnt plague your mind
he would leave and never come back
he would disappear
that addictive drug runs out

light-headed; loved-filled smiles
L O v E
L U s T
same thing, with different views

the only thing i really loved
was hurting you
seeing you cry when i did something
to break that little heart of yours

i never called you mine
'cept in my mind
opposites to the extreme
yet i cant stop thinking about you

you are my favourite heart-ache story
the one with the worst ending
yet i keep reading
i know. by heart, how this story ends

heart-breaking endings
real-life stories
you just watch the car crash
 --and dont do anything to help stop it--

 

she's as beautiful 

as liquid sugar

bubbling and simmering

so beautiful, yet painful

 

life is a never-ending car crash

enjoy the moments when it all comes together

candy-coated cyanide 

you'll never get enough

Author notes

well, random much?
its been a wierd night, so bite me.
just thinking about some stuff. my favourite lines are the 4 last stanzas. i think they could imspire youu :]

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Woot!
    Very good.
    Very Shelbers.
    :-P
    Bite you??
    Gladly!
    :-D
    Weird is always better.
    Unless you're comparing it to streird....

    Hi, I'm Cori.


    • GlowstickOfLove
      July 8, 2008
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      *monotone voice* hi corrri!
      haha AA.
      but thaaaaank youu :]]
      my other new one, i mention you in the thingy :]