Sub_Male his screen name
I gave it not one thought.
What it may have meant
I never had been taught.
A learned man of letters
seemed honest just as Job
though I sometimes wondered
why he was always in his robe.
He sent me a web cam
and Christmas cookies too.
He had big brown spaniel eyes
what harm could it do?
He was always sweet and kind
I had filed for divorce.
He filled a void deep inside
but I didn't want to force.
Convinced of his sincerity
I finally used the cam
thinking that I'd see his face
I looked and uttered, "Damn!"
I didn't know just what to do
for a moment was struck dumb
He had himself in his hands
said, "Baby help me cum"
He'd wormed his way into my heart
with a deep warm southern drawl
telling me I was so loved
I couldn't help but fall
all the time just using me
like a piece of porn
I've never felt so used
dirty then and worn.
so it came to it's conclusion
a lot of hurt was felt
just another lesson
from life's hand to be dealt.
A contest entry
- Online *Friends* and *Lovers*?? Is it always what it seems? by Carolina Moon.
450 points, ended July 14, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW! Honey I am soooo sorry this happened to you! You did a great job showing us what to be careful of! Great job on writing and showing us what it means to "on the wrong" of the keyboard in this case!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
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It's so easy to be pulled in by charming words, my friend and I have had numerous talks about this and wondered why we ever let it happen...doing this contest has helped alot. Thanks for your entry and sorry for what you have went through as well.
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Very well done. I have seen this scenario played out over and over again. Bitter small minded people take advantage of those who are good at heart.
I hope you gave him an e-boot in his e-ass.
Mike
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Lovely rhyme, beautiful form, miserable message
Unfortunately, the truth can't be denied... and honesty is the soul of poetry... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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You did a really good job with this piece. Sadly that sort of thing is out there, and sometimes lessons are learned. I know from experience when it comes to online things. Good luck in the contest.
~~Tori~~
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i enioyed readin this, as fake as it is we still want to believe,
All the best
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very very true lesson here hun, this is amazingly well penned,the rhyme scheme is kept throughout the poem,
and the hidden message is deep, we can all learn from it,
all my love,
kitty xxx
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