Something is broken that I can't get back,
It is torn to shreds and left on the ground.
You could hear it,
Now there is no sound.
How could you leave me there,
completly unwound?
There were tears everywhere,
apparntly I drowned.
I never noticed,
That you could always be found.
Your friends just sat,
and helped surround.
Latly whenever I was here,
everybody frowned.
That thing you ripped out,
it was never found.
It was called my heart,
and now it can't pound.
Now you can't tell that i am gone,
because I have feelings that were newfound.
I have found someone new,
and our love is bound.
Something was broken that I can't get back,
It was torn to shreds and left on the ground...
Author notes
Oh look it's for stupid butt COOPER McKINNEY! Thank you Daelynn for helping me write this poem!!!
A contest entry
- It's All About the Rhyme by BlackSwan.
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Comments
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You should run this through the spell check, but it is a good poem. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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You know I really enjoyed this poem and the message it conveyed. Though I'm a bit Obsessive Compulsive and the spelling errors irk me.
Try and fix it before I complete reading the other entries probably before tomorrow. Message me that you made the corrections and I'll re-evaluate this piece.
-Good Luck -
It's sad. I know exactly how you feel. Good luck
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