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sunshine




sunshine
in a blackbird's eye
I turn the earth






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  • Emerald13
    July 8
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    there's a lot of earth turning happening out your way huM? must be summer or sumit ! and i cant help it ... since reading your other one ... i see the earth turning round the sun ... and with line 1 its even stronger here ... haiku food for thought ...

    • Tishu
      July 8
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      LOL - Yep Gina summer it is, though more like Autumn already.
      I wrote both ku's at the same time - a mate and I working in the garden rotovating ready for laying a larger lawn. The birds loved it and were ever present getting very close to where we were working - the 'turning earth' bit I thought had a lovely double meaning. Later that day driving past a local farm to pick up the turf I saw the farmer out late working the field - and the rest as they say ......