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A Million Tears: A Billion Rain Drops

Withen our hearts and souls
There is a pool
Thats filled to the brim
It flows underneath our skin
It knows our every mistake
We gate it for our sanity's sake

Droplets fill that lake
The place in our heart we make
The one that our trueness swims
Close to our heart
Thats where we start

To the one that cares
We've all cried a million tears
That wet our lives pages
Holds our heart in cages
Filled with motion

They all fill the ocean
Of our sad emotion
That always twirled
Through everything we do
But know one has a clue

Of how our tears fill this world
Like a billion raindrops
That drop onto our faces
All the pain it erases

Like a billion Raindrops
Who hold onto silence
Hoping to go unnoticed
Walking in our sorrows
That falls in the sky
Noone turns to sigh

Noone ever thinks that maybe
Its the Earths turn
To cry

Author notes

My friend Amber said something so wise...
If you love someone write there name in a circle beause it doesn't break and goes on forever.

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  • sonae
    August 13

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    very good

    hoping to go unnoticed
    Walking in our sorrows

    Very well written I feel this way all the time and no one ever sees

  • Silverstar1993
    August 13

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    Beautiful!

    I love it, it is what so many people feel, so many people can relate to.
    "But know one has a clue"
    That is my favorite line.