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internal bond

internal bond

there are words that are hard to tell
the bond we share is internal
as you grow I grow
your little hands will soon touch mine
oh how I dream of the day
and when your born you'll have nothing to fear
I will be your rock
your protector
your shield
I will always love you
for it's our internal bond

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  • Mrs. C.
    August 18, 2008
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    ty for entering


  • aeolia
    July 13, 2008

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    Really sweet write for your baby Just one thing, though: the font is hard to read with the clashing font colour and background. You might want to change the colour of either.


    • eternalsol
      July 14, 2008
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      thanks so much for the comment and leting me know that it was hard to read