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You'll love this one.

Shoes clacking like a tapdance
Although they were not experienced

Hands holding the curve
Poised forward to shelter me from the sun

Waiting for that taxi to drive on by..
but it's not like I heard one.
(Despite seeing one, either.)

The wind stood miles away from me
And my dotted skirt hang still

I looked inside the coffee shop
Soon to shut down someday.

Nothing like the sound of a small conversation..
That only seemed like mouths doing calisthenics

Don't look at me,
I'm only waiting for a taxi.

Professionally.

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  • Mariana gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    Interesting write. I like it!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Interesting

    Very depth of a working lady of the night she brings herself out for all the to and waits as though for a taxi yet blind to its passing .good write here