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The Lake

Hold your breath.
Close your eyes.
The next view will be from the skies.
The lake is cold
The night is old.
The life we had was everything but bold.
The water will fill our lungs.
Like the love that filled our hearts.
Our souls will not be apart.
Look into my eyes
And hold my hand.
Let’s leave this life behind.
Life was too dull.
Death is a call.
We will soon be forgotten by all.
Nothing can stop us.
No one can hold us.
Let’s sink and forever be together.
They wouldn’t notice us there.
They wont know were here.
We’ll drown together.
We’ll die together.
Our love will live forever.
In the waters of the Lake.

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  • I really like dark pieces and you hav done a great job with this dark yet sad write

    Ticks all the boxes


  • happy-lil-artemis
    November 14, 2008
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    very good write you expressed your self freely
    good write

    love lots
    Artemis