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Eternal Rhythm


The cry of mankind
is echoed in the sea

- whispering in the day -
- thundering in the night -

carefully eroding
the granite walls of history
as time marches on.


Author notes

28 words. Contest. Prompt was the title of MysticCharm's work on DeviantArt, "The Cry of Mankind"

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Time does march on and we do seem to erode our history don't we? This made me pause and think about what we are doing to our history and to humanity in general! Excellent write


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Some beautifully woven language in this poem ...
    Especially love 'granite walls of history' ...
    Like the imagery ..

    Best of luck in the contest ...

    Steve