rainbows on rainbows
linger like rainfalls cascading
through my fingers
melting into the thoughts
that I've given to difference
like M&M's melting in my palm
left behind are my thoughts once more
sticky splotches of memories
sweet to taste colored
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pretty on my fingers
hard to wash away...
mmmm....
Author notes
Hmm...so if it confused you. Good. Lol.
Picture inspiration:
http://i320.photobucket.com/albums/nn327/urban_aero_skank/colorful.jpg
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Confused me? Maybe, lets see.
Dreams are like m & m's. The are multi-colored, and like dreams, the colors tend to bleed, leaving the traces on our hands...elusive like those dreams...and like our thoughts. I think.
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you're a smart one
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amazing poem
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i'm not confused by it. nice job.
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i like M&M's!!! they're cool!!! have a nice day, -slick99
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tasty imagery within this tasty piece!
Some I taste the sweetness here my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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I like the imagry in this one. and you have a certain.... style that brings the reader inward.
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I liked it, how it was two things sort of being compared in the same way.
(and my AP is always retarded, it never lets me put up backgrounds)
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