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Waking in Heaven

Our souls are all connected; separate we are not.

As we lie asleep in God, our dreams create this earth.

With each thought we receive everthing we say.

The universe gives us everything we ask; whether individual or group

It was to teach this, Jesus came so that we may learn from him.

To make our lives the best the earth has to give.

The greatest lesson Jesus taught was for us to forgive.

For when we learn to love and forgive ourselves and all we meet,

There be no need for space or time or more lessons to be learned.

We can than all awake from sleep and find everything we thought we knew was all a dream.

It is for this our Jesus weeps; he longs for us to wake.

He longs for us to follow in the steps he took.

Loving and Forgiving no matter how deep the pain.

To recognize that if we all saw that we are here as one;

We would combine our collective thoughts; forgive and love and wake in Heaven with him. 

 

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  • GOOD JOB!

    Thanks for writing this. I liked the expression and the visual description you put into this poem! BRILLIANT WORK! THANKS!!

  • AWESOME MY FRIEND

    SO MUCH TRUTH IN YOUR WORDS,

    WE HOLD ON TO SO MANY BURDEN AND JESUS CAME SO WE WOULD HAVE LIFE,

    FOR THE PRICE  HE PAID FOR US WE NEED TO EMBRACE LIFE,

    AND GIVE THANKS

    EQUISITE

    A PLEASURE TO READ

    GOD BLESS...

  • Deep.....

    This was very deep and alot of thought was put into it as well. A realy good take of the photo prompt as to what woud bring tears to the eyes of Jesus, the fact that we have not learned to love and forgive as you state in this piece. Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~~