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My Georgia Peach (Three) (Harrisham Sonnet)

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My Georgia Peach (Three)(Harrisham Sonnet)

                                    ♥

Lovely and gentle, my mysterious Georgia peach,

yet when making love, as voracious as a wolf, when

taking deer in flight. This her body demands, as each

gasp of ecstasy cries out, from her soul, deep within.

Pulsing flesh starving, as more and more peaks we reach,

gorging ourselves on our lust filled pleasures of sin.

                                     ♥            

Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday,

gentle caresses we exchange, gliding and touching

every sensitive part of our bodies, as we end our play.

Yielding to quiet thoughts, the pleasures of our loving,

guiding us softly, to sleep. The end of our perfect day,

giving way to darkness, beautiful, silver moon rising.

                                      ♥                                   

The secrets, the mystery the beauty of her many faces,

eternally imprison me, within her sensuous embraces.

.

Author notes

By ~ Maxboy ~~ Harrisham Sonnet
Image ~ photobucket
Background ~ My Sweet Georgia Peach ~ By ~ Riftkin

"We loved with a love that was more than love."~ Edgar Allan Poe

...................................................Contest~Option#27 Sonnet



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  • XpushXmeXagainX
    October 6
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    This was beautiful.
    It must be nice having a love like that.
    Thanks for sharing this piece

    • Maxboy gold member
      October 6
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      Thank you very much, I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.



  • Eclecta
    September 30
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    This is really good. I really liked how it flowed and how you played it all out. Best of luck in the contest.

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 30
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.

  • AutumnsFlame
    September 29
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    I'm not much into form poetry, but I think you have some very beautiful imagery in this, which is what I like to see. You almost don't even notice the rhyme in this, because it flows so well! Thank you for entering my contest.

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 29
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.

  • ArchOblivion
    September 21

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    I just learned of this form today actually and I really quite like it. Very nice rhyme and form as well as the essence of sensuality and peacefulness. Very beautiful. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck to you.

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 21
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment.

      Don

  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 15

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    So soft and gentle...sweet sensualality with elegance and grace...very emotion and well written...I loved it!
    Best to you, may it win many Golds...
    :


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 15
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      Thank you so much for reading the series, all the applause and I am so happy you enjoyed them.

      Love
      Don

  • Poetryintheblood
    September 14

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 14
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      Thank you for your wonderful coment.

      Don
  • longshot
    September 11
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    Great write thank you for entering.

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 11
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      Thank you very much for the comment.

      Don

  • unavailable
    September 10
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    Still good.

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 10
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      Thank you very much for the comment.

      Don
  • Broken-Bones
    September 10

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    This had so much affection in it that it blow me away. I loved its softness and its sensual nature, I felt it had a great ammount of personal sparkle and a brilliant balance between the sexual and the romantic. I loved the line "Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday," that was really sweet. The poem also read really well which made it even more enjoyable. Great work x


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 10
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I am really happy you enjoyed my poem.

      Thanks Again
      Don

  • whispernthedark gold member
    September 6

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    This is beautiful and sensual and I'm sure anyone in love reading this is saying "yes, that is it exactly". Wonderful poem, although the font is really large so it was a little off-putting. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • Seasons of Love
    August 31

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    I enjoyed it.
    However, can you explain to me how it related to the quote you chose--"To being an us for once, instead of a them!"? I don't really get it.

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 31
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      Thank you for your comment. In this series, he would like to capture and hold her as one "To being an us for once" but with all her many faces, she is many "instead of a them". But we all know that it's her many faces that makes her so irresistible to him.

      Perhaps, it is to abstract for others to see, but it makes since to me.

      Thanks Again
      Don

      • Seasons of Love
        September 1
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        Ah, okay. Got it. Thanks.

        • Maxboy gold member
          September 1
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          I was hopeing I explained it well enough. Maybe I can try to bring that out a little better in number four.

          Thanks
          Don

  • rc3 gold member
    August 29
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    eloquent

    Lovely flow of words and creates a sensual image
    Thank you for your entry
    Robert


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 29
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      Thank you for the applause and your wonderful comment.

      Don

  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 26

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    You have spilled some amazing ink with this set of sonnets. Beautiful work, thanks for entering and good luck

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 13
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      !! WOW !!

      Thank you so very much for the Silver Trophy, I am very pleased you enjoyed my poem.

      Love
      Don

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 26
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      Thank you again for your wonderful comments.

      Don

  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 25

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    What I like about this write (and I will attribute
    this to the original form used) is the way it
    glides, each stanza an interplay to tangle the next.
    The voice is sensuous and screams the Poe quote.
    Thank-you for this pleasure, Blue

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 25
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      Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment.

      Thank You
      Don

  • pain without love
    August 24
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    a great write, with an excellent flow, great job


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 24
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment and applause.

      Thanks
      Don

  • chasingwhiterabbits
    August 24
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    This is beautiful, thank you so much for entering. It's so sensual, I just love it! Good luck!

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 24
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.

  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 24
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    thanks for your entry great piece good luck

  • paradoxical wish
    August 21

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    Wow, This's cool!

    Thnx for entering & Best Of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 22
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.

      Maxboy
      Don
  • eightball666
    August 21

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    I agree with the comment underneath of me,
    Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday,
    fantastic line. Good job and good luck.


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 21
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.

      Don

  • Childofserenity
    August 21

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    Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday,
    ****
    thats a great line. love the meaning.
    thanks for entering.

  • perfectsunset
    August 19

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    Wow this was so beautifully sensual & passionately penned. Absolutely loved this!!

    Thanks foe entering & best of luck

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 19
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I am pleased you enjoyed it.

      Thanks
      Don

  • Piccola gold member
    August 17
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    thank you for having the courtesy of obeying all of the rules and for your beautiful entry.
  • Silent Hawk gold member
    August 13
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    Maxboy,

    I will admit I am not familiar with the form. However I am familiar with the needed elements of good poetry.

    I must say your thoughts provide a wealth of imagery to the reader. It is obvious in this offering of the sincerity of your thoughts.

    Knowing your inspiration personally, brings an added appreciation to your words of honor.

    Niaish for your offering. Best of Luck!

    Silent Hawk


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 13
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      I am greatful that you know my inspiration personally. Then you must fully understand the person and why I hold such great admiration for her.

      Niaish for giving me the opportunity to express to others the wonder of this great lady of ladies.

      Maxboy
      Don
      • Silent Hawk gold member
        August 13

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        Maxboy (Mr. Don)

        first let me say the honor of the opportunity given is mine.

        I can understand with ease the admiration you feel. For she has the ability to touch many lives, to grace our world and to give tirelessly of her wisdom to us all.

        Respectfully,

        Silent Hawk
        aka Richard

        • Maxboy gold member
          August 13
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          Silent Hawk [Richard]

          It is plain to see, by your words, that she has touched your world as well as mine and the many others who's worlds cannot be the same once knowing this wonderful person.

          She is as the tip of a pyramid with her goodness and wisdom spreading from her center outward to all in the path of her kindness.

          Respectfully

          Maxboy
          Don

  • Piccola gold member
    August 12

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    Is there anyway this can be broken up another way so that the rhyme is easier to find? I admit it, I'm an idiot and know nothing at all about this form. I know where it rhymes it's just hard for me to ... read it. I'm used to just end-line rhyme where you see it so easily. Ijust wondered if this type of sonnet has to be written this way. of course it does or you wouldn't have bothered ... sorry. Thank you for entering

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 12
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      haha Sorry for the confusion, I guess that is the nature of the beast. I have to admit, this is the only form of sonnet I understand. All other sonnet forms leave me in the dust. So, if you understand the others, my hat goes off to you.

      Thanks
      Don

  • dabpunx
    August 12
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    elegant and tasteful


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 12
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you very much for the comment and applause.

  • l33t-n1nj4
    August 8

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    "The secrets, the mystery the beauty of her many faces,

    eternally imprison me, within her sensuous embraces." an amazing way to end this it works perfectly

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 8
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I am very happy you enjoyed my poem.

      Thanks Again
      Don

  • Riftkin gold member
    August 7

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    The secrets, the mystery the beauty of her many faces,
    eternally imprison me, within her sensuous embraces.


    this sums up the poem...
    for life is all a mystery

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 7
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      As will always be, for everyone, not just you and me.

      Thank you for your comment.
      Don

  • sora.
    August 6

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    woooo.
    o_0
    i have to admit this has made me feel a little bi-curious...
    hahaha.
    great work.
    =D

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 6
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      hahaha I am happy I could help, thanks for the comment.

  • BorntothePurple
    August 4

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    Excellent. I love the contrast in the first few lines between a gentle 'peach' and a ravenous lover (taking deer in flight, just awesome) Great job, great rhyme- I have deep respect for people who write sonnets of any type, as that is a form I have never been able to master. You really did it justice. Nice job, and thanks for entering. Congratulations on the trophies, they were well deserved.

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 4
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment. I am really happy you enjoyed it.

  • Swan song gold member
    August 2
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    Wow This was excellent! Wow is about all I can say and awesome!!!


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 3
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and applause. I am very happy you liked my poem. It is a great complement coming from such an accomplished writer.

      Thanks
      Don

  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 29

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    though,

    i'm not one for sonnets. This is more than intriguing. WONDERFUL
    Thank you for your entry and good luck.

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 29
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      Thank you for all your wonderful comments. Have I intrigued enough in "My Georgia Peach" the series that you want more? Are you on pins and needles waiting to see episode four? Well, I havn't written it yet so you will just have to wait. hahaha

      Thank You Again
      Don

  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 27

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    You have written a loving tribute for your Georgia peach and your fondness for her.
    You have nicely expressed your thoughts.

    You have applied the rules of Harrisham Sonnet correctly.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 27
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      Thank you so much for the applause and comment. I was hopeing I would have it right this time.

      Thanks Again

  • Frankenchrist
    July 26

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    A well done peice... I agree why you have written this work of art... I know the feeling of luck when you are so deep into someone...


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 26
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      Thank you very much for the applause and grand complement.

  • crazymomma
    July 26
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    Very lovely imagery and so sweet. This was so romantic. Thanks for entering and good luck

  • Weetzie bat
    July 25

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    I think that this one and the first one are my favorite out of the 3. i really love the imagery. and the metaphors. thank you for entering

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 25
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      Thank you for the wonderful comments. I am happy you enjoyed My Georgia Peach series.

  • Poetryintheblood
    July 23
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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 23
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      Thank you for the nice comment. I just noticed, that you have seen this poem in another contest of yours. I am sorry for the error on my part. If you would like to remove it, please do, it's not a problem for me.

      Thanks
      Don

  • Lady Altheia
    July 23

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    contest hoodink

    I tought this was a lovely poem. I see it is entered in many contests. Good luck to you. I see you haven't been as badly bashed as other poets i this contest.