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My Georgia Peach (Three) (Harrisham Sonnet)

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My Georgia Peach (Three)(Harrisham Sonnet)

                                    ♥

Lovely and gentle, my mysterious Georgia peach,

yet when making love, as voracious as a wolf, when

taking deer in flight. This her body demands, as each

gasp of ecstasy cries out, from her soul, deep within.

Pulsing flesh starving, as more and more peaks we reach,

gorging ourselves on our lust filled pleasures of sin.

                                     ♥            

Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday,

gentle caresses we exchange, gliding and touching

every sensitive part of our bodies, as we end our play.

Yielding to quiet thoughts, the pleasures of our loving,

guiding us softly, to sleep. The end of our perfect day,

giving way to darkness, beautiful, silver moon rising.

                                      ♥                                   

The secrets, the mystery, the beauty of her many faces,

eternally imprison me, within her sensuous embraces.

.

Author notes

By ~ Maxboy ~~ Harrisham Sonnet
Image ~ photobucket
Background ~ My Sweet Georgia Peach ~ By ~ Riftkin

"We loved with a love that was more than love."~ Edgar Allan Poe

FORM:
Harrisham Sonnet poetry form was created by Indian poetess ~ Harrisham Minhas.

Harrisham Sonnet is written in 3 stanzas consisting of 2 sestets and a couplet.

For each of the stanzas, the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of the next line.
There is no restriction on the starting letter of the first line in each of the stanzas.

There is no restriction on the syllable count in this form, but it is required that the poem should have a good rhythm to it.


Rhyme scheme:

First stanza : ababab
Second stanza: cdcdcd
Third stanza: ee



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  • cookie-monster
    July 11
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    hmm... This was an interesting style of peotry to learn. I'll hafta give it a try


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 12
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      Thank you very much for your comment, please do try the form, it is a fun one to work with.



  • nobodys-girl
    July 2

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    so romantic and so full of emotion. i just love it! thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!

  • The Rainbows Mind
    June 29

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    This poem explains sensuality and sexuality in a clever form. I enjoyed the style and most importantly, I enjoyed the way the imagery and emotions were expressed.
    Good poem, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering.
    BC.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 29
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • The Fun House silver member
    June 27
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    The form is well done here and the images complete and rich. Very romantic and sensually done.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 27
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Kira65
    June 26

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    it is a very good poem, it has great emotion and the flow is just perfect! Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • Antebellum
    June 23

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    Deffinitly deserving of all the trophys.
    I dont understand the form, but the writing is amazing.

    "The secrets, the mystery, the beauty of her many faces,
    eternally imprison me, within her sensuous embraces."

    Lovly ending.

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 24
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write. The form is shown in the Authors Notes, I hope they are clear enough.

      Thank You


  • Lively Matter
    June 23

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    Wow, Sir, May I simply say wow... I don't think i could ever hope to write a poem of that calibur, Thanks for entering!

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 23
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and compliment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write. Sure you will, you have plenty of time to enjoy life to draw from, it is not a race; just enjoy yourself.



  • Ami
    June 20
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    Wow great write and This really deserved all those trophies thanks for entering and Good luck -♥Amy♥


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 7
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      Than you so much for your beautiful comment, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.



  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    June 14

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    Ah, very nice..
    I do have to admit,The title caught my eye..i would say because I'm a Georgia Peach
    The erotica was very nice and sensual,and not smutty. I liked the form and how this was written. It painted some very nice imagery.
    Very well written.
    -Mandi


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 14
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      Thank you very much Mandi Georgia Peach for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • bonjourbunnie
    April 29

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    I like the flow and composition, and you crafted what she was to you very well.

    I enjoyed the piece, thank you for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 8
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am very happy you liked my write.



  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    April 20

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    excellent~

    This is excellent
    I have never heard of this sonnet before...
    Enjoyed the read and best of luck in the contest
    Congrats on the previous entry's
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 20
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      Thank you so much Sis for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write. Thanks for the read.

      Thanks Sis


  • Heavens Child
    April 19

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    Beautiful and erotic. Done with such amazing taste. I also love the title. Best wishes and thank you for entering.

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 20
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      Thank you ever so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment, but most of all, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Fire-Fly
    April 13

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    A very lovely poem, good structure on a difficult form and nicely set out.

    A joy to read.

    Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 18
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      Thank you very much for wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Mercury Rising
    April 8

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    This Harrisham Sonnet seems rather tricky, and you've made it look easy. This is a wonderful poem, and it was a delight to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 11
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment. I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Again


  • Oleander
    April 8
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    this is really amazing! Great work!


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 9
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Ami
    April 7

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    Really Good

    Great write and
    Thank You for entering
    Good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 8
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      Thank you for your comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Brian A
    April 7

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    I've read this piece once before actually. The Harrisham sonnet is a very cool form. I also enjoy the veritable orgasm of commas, though you may be missing a few (such as between 'mystery' and 'the' in the first line of the couplet). I often binge on punctuation marks myself. Anyway, I think the final couplet is my favorite. I also like the line "asvoracious as a wolf when taking deer in flight". Thanks for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 19

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      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Cyanide Dreams
    April 5

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    Oh, what great emotions in this piece. I liked the form and how this was written. Your imagery is great and painted a mental picture in my mind. Great job and good luck in the contest.
    Josh


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 5
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • fluffatron69
    April 2

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    Really nicely written Sonnet! It's an interesting form as well. I enjoyed reading this very much, and enjoy the way love and 'play' combine in this to convey your feelings very well! Good poem!


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 2
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • RealitysAStory
    March 26
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    What a poem. Please let me read more of your work. Wow. Write on and good luck.

    • Maxboy gold member
      March 30
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and you are welcome to read my work anytime.



  • doolie gold member
    January 30

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    A beautiful and sensual write sweetie. It's full of emotions and was a pleasure to read.
    Congrats on all the trophies.
    Love,
    Laura


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 30
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thank You


  • Denerica
    January 19
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    Imagery to fill the senses. Well written and deserving of the awards. Blessings.


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 19
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.



  • Sacred Geometry
    January 19

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    wow, er bearing in mind im only 15, its a good poem and i like it, it shows the beauty of lust.
    thankyou for entering

    • Maxboy gold member
      January 19
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      Hmmm, I would have thought filters would have prevented that. Maybe I should remove it, but it is kinda hard to un-ring the bell. Sorry !!!


  • Zane Rose
    January 16

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    Your words are wonderous! You took something beautiful and made it even more so with your imagery and comparison. I enjoyed reading this very much.
    Good job, good luck, and keep up the great writing!
    ~AEO~


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 16
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      I am so pleased you enjoyed my write, thank you for your beautiful comment.



  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    January 5
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    great imagery and comparisons. good job thank you for ur entery and good luck.


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 5
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      Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am happy you liked my sonnet.



  • Need For Redemption
    December 23, 2008
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    Wow. Very discreptive and quite romantic.


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 23, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Nicada silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    This is quite a beautiful poem and I love the background. Very nice write, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 1, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.



  • BabyBun silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    This deserves all the accolades - well done and good luck.


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 3, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.


  • trekkergirl
    October 26, 2008

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    This is very interesting. Congrats on all the trophies and thanks for sharing this one with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • XpushXmeXagainX
    October 6, 2008
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    This was beautiful.
    It must be nice having a love like that.
    Thanks for sharing this piece


    • Maxboy gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      Thank you very much, I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.



  • SchizoChic
    September 30, 2008

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    This is really good. I really liked how it flowed and how you played it all out. Best of luck in the contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 30, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.


  • AutumnsFlame
    September 29, 2008

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    I'm not much into form poetry, but I think you have some very beautiful imagery in this, which is what I like to see. You almost don't even notice the rhyme in this, because it flows so well! Thank you for entering my contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.


  • ArchOblivion
    September 21, 2008

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    I just learned of this form today actually and I really quite like it. Very nice rhyme and form as well as the essence of sensuality and peacefulness. Very beautiful. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck to you.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment.

      Don


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    So soft and gentle...sweet sensualality with elegance and grace...very emotion and well written...I loved it!
    Best to you, may it win many Golds...
    :


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 15, 2008
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      Thank you so much for reading the series, all the applause and I am so happy you enjoyed them.

      Love
      Don


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 14, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful coment.

      Don

  • longshot
    September 11, 2008
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    Great write thank you for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 11, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the comment.

      Don


  • unavailable
    September 10, 2008
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    Still good.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 10, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the comment.

      Don

  • Broken-Bones
    September 10, 2008

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    This had so much affection in it that it blow me away. I loved its softness and its sensual nature, I felt it had a great ammount of personal sparkle and a brilliant balance between the sexual and the romantic. I loved the line "Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday," that was really sweet. The poem also read really well which made it even more enjoyable. Great work x


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 10, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I am really happy you enjoyed my poem.

      Thanks Again
      Don


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 6, 2008

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    This is beautiful and sensual and I'm sure anyone in love reading this is saying "yes, that is it exactly". Wonderful poem, although the font is really large so it was a little off-putting. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 8, 2008
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment.

      Don


  • Avalanche.Echo
    August 31, 2008

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    I enjoyed it.
    However, can you explain to me how it related to the quote you chose--"To being an us for once, instead of a them!"? I don't really get it.

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 31, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment. In this series, he would like to capture and hold her as one "To being an us for once" but with all her many faces, she is many "instead of a them". But we all know that it's her many faces that makes her so irresistible to him.

      Perhaps, it is to abstract for others to see, but it makes since to me.

      Thanks Again
      Don


      • Avalanche.Echo
        September 1, 2008
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        Ah, okay. Got it. Thanks.

        • Maxboy gold member
          September 1, 2008
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          I was hopeing I explained it well enough. Maybe I can try to bring that out a little better in number four.

          Thanks
          Don


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    August 29, 2008
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    eloquent

    Lovely flow of words and creates a sensual image
    Thank you for your entry
    Robert


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 29, 2008
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      Thank you for the applause and your wonderful comment.

      Don


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    You have spilled some amazing ink with this set of sonnets. Beautiful work, thanks for entering and good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 13, 2008
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      !! WOW !!

      Thank you so very much for the Silver Trophy, I am very pleased you enjoyed my poem.

      Love
      Don


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 26, 2008
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      Thank you again for your wonderful comments.

      Don


  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    What I like about this write (and I will attribute
    this to the original form used) is the way it
    glides, each stanza an interplay to tangle the next.
    The voice is sensuous and screams the Poe quote.
    Thank-you for this pleasure, Blue


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment.

      Thank You
      Don


  • Fallen-Phases
    August 24, 2008
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    a great write, with an excellent flow, great job


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment and applause.

      Thanks
      Don


  • chasingwhiterabbits
    August 24, 2008
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    This is beautiful, thank you so much for entering. It's so sensual, I just love it! Good luck!


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 24, 2008
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    thanks for your entry great piece good luck


  • Hebz
    August 21, 2008

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    Wow, This's cool!

    Thnx for entering & Best Of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 22, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.

      Maxboy
      Don


  • eightball666
    August 21, 2008

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    I agree with the comment underneath of me,
    Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday,
    fantastic line. Good job and good luck.


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.

      Don


  • Childofserenity
    August 21, 2008

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    Holding each other as if no tomorrow, no yesterday,
    ****
    thats a great line. love the meaning.
    thanks for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 21, 2008
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      Thank you for the great comment.

      Don

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