Intensified gaze,
channels beauties raised disdain,
even at her dismay,
Quietly smothering,
underground savage beings.
Elating unadulterated consternation,
evident in her garnet soul.
Negating all past sentiments.
Author notes
Pic Prompt:
done by YoureNoGoodForMe
Acrostic(Ice Queen) and Haiku
Hope you enjoy it....
A contest entry
- Quickie, loves♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
450 points, ended July 8, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Formed poetry contest by Luciferschild.
650 points, ended March 1, 27 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know how I did....
Comments
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excellent acrostic!!
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this is a good right but some of the words confused me ther for i could not totaly apresiate this poem i am sorry if i had a dictionary and wanted to look up ever other word i think it would be a good poem but these words confuse me
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For me, the last line said it all....'negating past sentiments'....Killing off whatever once existed.
Superbly written, with a hint of melancholy and nostalgia to it. Even in the depths of misery, beauty can still be found...
Bravo Vik!
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Captivating and beautiful, I love the combination of different forms
Best of luck♥
Stay safe
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Ohkay, so I am basically in awe right now
This was absolutely alluring & I was hooked from the first line. I loved your take on the prompt. Thank you so much for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥
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