One blonde curl
ziplocked, tucked
away...
like the lily
I plucked
when you were born.
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A contest entry
- just how creative are you # 3 by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended July 8, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Keepsakes
how pretty. congrats on the gold,
-slick99
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How beautiful!
Memories...how sacred they are, and now immortalized in your poetry!
Regards,
DeGraw
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Great title. Simple, great imagery, full of tenderness and the touch of mothering.
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sucker punch
for a dad with daughters and grand daughters.
I love this one to pieces.
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Oh this is truly amazing and so so beautiful. I can feel the love echoing throughout this.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Oh wow, this is just beautiful... x
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Awww how enchanting is this! One of your kids and a wonderful memory. Love, C
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