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Dinner at Six

 

 

 

I dreamt' a taste of you my love
Something aspiring to bring you along
A little jingle of fancy scent
Sweet imagination to envelop my

sensory pleasure

A little curve, n' glistening bead
Trembling twists with permeating kiss

On edge ever changing
Forever teasing with your

savory treasure

Playing me with charms and giggles
free-lancing across my heart
Invigorating quest for addictive love
Worthy quarry by my

epicurean measure

 

 




 

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  • daffodilblossom
    November 10
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    free lancing across my heart...perfect line


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    July 31, 2008
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    Interesting write, that seems to play with the senses. Bravo! And thanks for entering.

    Serenity

  • mangledDawn
    July 9, 2008
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    oh this poem is tasty!
    i really really enjoyed this.
    as always, you are brilliant


  • hoodoolover silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Such a romantic devil you are, this is sweet with the heat you have for your honey, a pleasure to read.