Private Conversation

unquestionable moments
as she trembled
upon his embrace

secrets disclosed
laying eye to eye
upon their sheets

secluded lovers
slicing the air
with hushed sighs

unspoken tears
between two

a sweet song encased,
protective thoughts

laced with love

her lips a tiny smile
lingering presence in
private conversations

Author notes

17. Private Conversation

Just a thank you to my love. He knows this privite conversation.(smile)

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Painted Nails
October 18, 2008
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great piece! This is really amazing. Thanks for entering and good luck!
Sydney
xxRainbowDawnxx
July 9, 2008

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I think I've been in this position before, though I hate to remind myself of it, as I do most things that are beautiful, as I fear losing them when I get them. Delicate and sensual, love how you really made me wish I was there with the one I adore right now.
Xianaria
July 8, 2008
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i love you baby, and yes i do. lifetime.
Maedes
July 8, 2008

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congrats! now i can sense 'love in the air'
success in your contest