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Disgruntled Fan

OH MY GOD!

What the fuck
did you do, Dee?

Love MUST be blind
because it's clearly plain to see.

Do you realize what you did today?

Throwing you chance away with someone like Jay.

Not only was he a one in a million kind of guy,
He also topped the package off with an adorable, little Ty.

Wench, you broke MY heart,
and I'm just a fan at home.
Imagining about things I'd do,
if I had Jay all alone.

Oh, not about me, back to you,
and talking about what you chose to do.

I know you love Jesse,
and "to thine own self be true..."
So pack Jason up and send him to me,
I promise I'll make him like new.

Maybe when God granted a man for you,
he mistakenly sent you mine too...

Author notes

This contest revolves around the truth about life and all the lost morals standards that society no longer uses.

This poem is my feelings on how the season finale ended on the bachelorette. She says she found true love, so as Shakespeare said "..." I was rooting for my man, Jason, and was devastated for him, lol. At least he still has Ty!

One of the lost morals of todays society is the thirst for knowledge, many of us (me included) come home and just watch mindless t.v., rather then read a good book, or even just watch the history or learning channel. Instead we watch the Bachelorette, or Survivor, or Big Brother, or Hero's, or Lost...you get the picture. I should be reading more Shakespeare, painting my own personal picasso, or banging out beautiful symphonies...not getting agitated about if someone I never know is in love with someone else I'll never know. Can't wait til next season...

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  • Nicada silver member
    July 8, 2008

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    This is really funny to me because as much as I hate to admit it, I was so mad about her not picking Jason too. You are right, many of us do sit in front of the tv for entertainment probably more than we should. I'll be right back next season too. This was refreshing to read. Blessings, Patty


  • righteousme
    July 8, 2008
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    there is something seriously wrong with you... thank god i love ya...


  • Mila7
    July 7, 2008

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    hahahahahaha I know what you mean, and recently I have reminded myself that I haven't picked up a new book since summer started. I love Gossip Girl too much lol

  • darrylblacksr
    July 7, 2008
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    Thank you so much for your entry, this was something totally different and I wish you the bless of luck in the contest...