If ever I was asked to describe you,
I would liken you to all that is beautiful.
Like the soft, fragile beauty of a rose,
such is your softness
and through this softness,
your beauty is thus, magnified.
If ever I was asked to describe you,
I would liken you to an evening sunset
with its colors blending;
Painting nature's portrait in a golden sky.
Such, would be your portrait--
For, like a sunset, your beauty is magnetic;
Drawing attention to itself;
Holding one's eye with its inner-magnificence
that cannot help but, shine outwardly.
For, your beauty is natural;
Not attained by artificial means.
It is internal as well as external.
It is pure and unblemished.
Your beauty shines through your eyes;
It is heard in your voice;
It is felt in your gentle smile and touch
and to know you, is to know pure beauty itself!
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A contest entry
- Favorites of Silent Hawk by PureCountry.
875 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
What a beautiful write on beauty and I agree to thats it's natural beauty on the inside on the inner man beautiful poem.
Sharon lagueux
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Your words paint such a beautiful and romantic picture. I love this. Congrats on the HM.
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perfect fit for this picture, love the imingery as well, beauty you have to choose if it is or not, this certainly pointed to perfect poetry..
thank you for sharing
Linda
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Very sweetly written, I can only wish that one day someone will think this of me.
Thank you for entering this into my contest.
--Katie--
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Would
that someone might utter such words to me, a romantic old soul. You have captured my attention and my admiration as a writer.
Well Done.
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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eautiful
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Excellent
Truly beauty captured in your wonderful and gifted write. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh! *melts* this is just divine, I can picture these words so clearly in my mind, I love it.
Thanks so much for sharing such beauty,
Luck. -
WOW
RAMANCE FLOWED SO SWEETLY ACROSS THE PAGE
PURE ELLIGENCE.
GOD BLESS...
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This was so beautiful and so filled with the emotions of a romantic!! I love this side of you my friend.... You have captivated me here.....Best wishes!
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Oh my, this is breathtakingly romantic and lovely. Wow! Penned with excellence. I wish you all the luck in the contest.
Linda
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