you told me you loved me
you told me you cared
you told me i was all you wanted
that you would do anything to make me happy
that you wouldn't dare hurt me
you were my everything
you were all i thought about
when we were together it felt
like nothing could break us apart
everything was right
but you didn't mean anything you said
when i needed you most
you ran away and hid
you ditched me for you friends
you used me as your play-toy
nothing more then a doll
that you could play with
in whatever way you wanted
everyone told me
"he abuses you"
"he doesn't love you like you love him"
"let him go, he's not worth it"
but i couldn't, i was in love with him
then that fateful day came when you told me
we're over, its not working
i cried, i couldn't sleep
i loved you even though you were a dick
you left me and i still love you
i still cry over you
i still cant sleep because of you
i still pretend to be happy for you
i still could never dream of hurting you
even after you shattered my heart
i still love you, i cant let go
A contest entry
- Your love is my perfect disaster. by ellaelu.
1000 points, ended July 18, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
no harsh criticism, i just write to write, not to be criticised
Comments
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Wow, this is a pretty amazing poem.
I know exactly how you feel. I still cry over someone, and I still lose sleep, and I still love them.
Very powerful words here.
Great write, keep it up. :]
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you used me as your play-toy
nothing more then a doll
that you could play with
in whatever way you wanted
simply lovely, this is a work!
i do wish you well with your contest
i liked reading keep up the good work!
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