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Loving You

Starring at your face
wishing I could only say
words that rumble through my mind
scared that you might connect the lines.

Wanting you to speak
what I can only think
these 3 words you won't say
the question being do you feel the same?

Why can't I read your mind?
Is it parallel to mine?
Do you have words unspoken?
maybe I am better off not knowing. . .

Whispered words while you sleep
maybe they will make you dream
of a future we might have
if love is what we say.

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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    July 10, 2008
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    i love this...the unknown love..so common yet so rare...good job

    {Gothic Beauty}