She tries to cover herself
But I can see underneath.
Underneath all the smiles and giggles.
She's broken,
With a shattered heart,
Melted soul.
She's an excellent actress,
Hiding herself from the world.
She's surrounded by people,
but feels so alone.
Her dreams are haunted,
by her personal demons.
She feels like she's walking towards the light,
but its dull and hard to see.
I wish I could help her...
But its difficult to help
yourself when you don't realise
you're in so far...
Author notes
PoisonousBeauty
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A contest entry
- favorites by xXcrazychristinaXx by Lonely Christina.
1000 points, ended July 21, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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"She's an excellent actress,
Hiding herself from the world."
thats really beautiful

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this was a well writen poem doll
somuch emotion in here
and loved the ending so very true
keep up the work and i wish you all the best! -
yay thanks 4 entering!love you too babe. sounds like ur describing me here lol
xoxo- christina



