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She's broken

She tries to cover herself
But I can see underneath.
Underneath all the smiles and giggles.

She's broken,
With a shattered heart,
Melted soul.

She's an excellent actress,
Hiding herself from the world.

She's surrounded by people,
but feels so alone.

Her dreams are haunted,
by her personal demons.

She feels like she's walking towards the light,
but its dull and hard to see.

I wish I could help her...

But its difficult to help
yourself when you don't realise
you're in so far...

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PoisonousBeauty
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  • mathu is dead
    July 28, 2008
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    "She's an excellent actress,
    Hiding herself from the world."

    thats really beautiful


  • endless-lover silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    this was a well writen poem doll
    somuch emotion in here
    and loved the ending so very true
    keep up the work and i wish you all the best!


  • Lonely Christina
    July 7, 2008
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    yay thanks 4 entering!love you too babe. sounds like ur describing me here lol
    xoxo- christina