I just want
him to just let go
be charming
sweet
as he asks
not worry
about
tomorrow
Author notes
I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin
A contest entry
- Just 18 Words To Make Me Shock by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended July 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you did a very great awesome job for this contest i liked it thanks for joining the contest and good luck to you
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sometimes you have to push a little to get what you desire.
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cool write.



