life is like a dream,
you step in a door,
and everyone is seen.
this is not your dream,
this is just a theme.
A theme to keep you leaned,
against your own dream.
your mind telling you one thing,
and you wind up faced with piece.
A piece of a puzzle,
you have never seen.
A contest entry
- Favorites of Silent Hawk by PureCountry.
875 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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My sweetheart...your words of wisdom amaze me sometimes...for life is as a dream and we are given one piece at a time...congrats my special granddaughter
on the trophy, so well deservedyou make this GrandMother PROUD
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This is a fun departure from the day's duties; it allows the mind to revisit dreams.
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This made me smile! The mind is so full of surprises, you never know which piece of the puzzle you're going to get next...excellent write!
Thanks for sharing this,
Luck. -
True Philosophy
is in the lines of this poem.
You speak of the wonders of dreams and the mystery of life my friend. You have crafted a wonderful piece from one simple yet powerful thought.
Thank You for entering and Best of Luck
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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