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I see your wonders

In wisdom, You created all

In perfect order, you have drawn the expanse

The Planets, the stars

All visible, and invisible to the extremities

of the Cosmos

And yet, man cannot begin to understand

your humble motives

Your good will, unto all Creation

Your sacrificial offering , to salvage of what remains

For You, know there is still good in each and everyone

Oh, Lord

Your wonders, I see

and cannot help, to wonder!!!

 

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    wondering seems to be what we are all good at Nick. This is lovely, good luck in contest and much love.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 8, 2008

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    I love how strongly your faith comes through this poem. Your words are passionate and I love that.

    Thanks for sharing this,

    Luck.

  • PureCountry
    July 7, 2008

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    Aptly Put,

    to behold all of creation with all of its wonders. Then to realize your place within it, we are in awe of that part of the divine plan as well, i we are aware of He who created us all.

    Well Done and Best of Luck To You In The Contest.

    Niaish,
    Silent Hawk