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He sees it all

He sees the blood we shed
The tears that flow
The senseless killings
The mercy we do not show

He sees his children turn away
To do all sinful things
He feels the pain of the suffering
He sees we have no shame

He sees children without guidance
Turn to weapons and drugs
He sees children having children
Treating their own parents like dogs

He sees our promiscous lifestyle
Ever moving away from God
He sees us bent and broken
And then he sees some more.

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Yes...He sees it all..............

    He sees us turn away from him and then he sheds tears when we reap the seeds of those very sins. Great take on the photo prompt...Thanks for your entry and then best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~~