feelings bottled up in glass containers
waiting to be broken
no heart will be spared
everything gets broken
from a terrible beholder
the ♥ONE♥ holds your glass container
you wait for the day he decides to let go
and
d-r.o+p
there you go
shattered into a million pieces
like it was never even a whole piece
apologies made of glue may be able to be put it back together
but can never fully repair what was once there
all of the pieces cannot be repaired
you will never truly be whole again...
spare yourself before youve been
B
R
O
k
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this new guy and i cannot stop thinking about him
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good poem, maybe to improve you should work on
The third verse it is slightly awkward
Its good, i really do like it, because there is a snece of playfulness to this poem. Well done. -
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thank you
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thanks much...i appreciate it
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Yep, loving this majorly, best one I've read today
Soo true. I love the lines; "apologies made of glue may be able to be put back together
but can never fully repair what was once a whole"
Simply awesome
Hope everythings ok your way
Claire x
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