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Countless Stars

Sometimes this world faints like tears
And all I do is think of you
Would be what is the rain that is falling now
Thoughts are loud chatters they annoy me
In the night when you hold me without a
Touch it is like a kiss that I can not feel
Or a beautiful word that I can not hear

He asked, "how much do I miss him
I could not say,
"countless stars…countless stars…"









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  • ms-cuddles
    October 20, 2008

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    Sounds like you miss him alot. This was short, sweet and to the point. Thank you for entering this and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles