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two toadstools

two toadstools
push through the soil
bulldozer

Author notes

I wrote this at the Botanical Gardens, while on a ginko (haiku walk).

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  • bengalibelle
    July 19

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    Unique

    Two toadstools and a bulldozer! Who knew they could open up such interesting possibilities? But you are always unique and original with your observations!
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Sailor Ptolema gold member
    July 17

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    Oh I like this! Such a great 'ku; a clear picture with a surprise at the end! How fun to see it in the botanical gardens. UCLA has it's own set of Botanical Gardens... I think i should go take a walk there .
    Great 'ku & g'luck!

    ~Pt


  • DogFish silver member
    July 13
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    "ginko"...oh, I love new words! And I really like this word!! Thanks for sharing it with us!


    • myron
      July 13
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      ginko

      Thanks Dog Fish for all your comments. Yes i love the word too.

  • The Third Eye
    July 12
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    lost my comment


    those toadstools have captured your mind!! invasion!!!

    another 'ku on toadstools.. you just made me get stuck onto their image as well.. i feel like drawing one.

    vertical bulldozers... now that's interesting.. i can envision this in slow motion..
    do you know of any architecture that resembles a toadstool? i'd love to see one..


    • DogFish silver member
      July 12

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      "do you know of any architecture that resembles a toadstool"...
      at Santa Claus' Village in Merton, Ontario there was a kiosque built to resemble a mushroom...but I fear it's been bulldozed!



      • The Third Eye
        July 13
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        ooh, thanks for letting me know



        aww...

        was it myron's toadstools that did it??? were they jealous of the huge toadstool that suddenly popped outta nowhere?
        R.I.P.


        • myron
          July 13

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          toaDSTOOLS

          My toadstools have become a lovely, calm couple since they pushed up through the earth together. but that bulldozer in the third line could have been the culprit!

        • DogFish silver member
          July 13
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          It could well have been his toadstools; they sound powerful!

  • azure85 gold member
    July 8

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    two toadstools
    push through the soil
    bulldozer

    Nice set of images here-the toadstools, the eternal struggle to live, and the bulldozer. This is a very meaningful haiku, thank you so much.


  • Pretani gold member
    July 8
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    Hello Myron - good imagery here! Like it.

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