Passions promised,
access; denied!
Alone,
bereft,
deserted,
I cried.
Darkness overtook your once warm heart;
Me?
Betrayed,
again!
Author notes
I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin.
A contest entry
- Just 18 Words To Make Me Shock by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended July 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Upgrade Your Green Trophy by Nicada.
850 points, ended August 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This says so much in so few words. Nice job here. Thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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nice
nice short write for the prompt . . congrats on the honorable mention
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this was deep and this was nice you really did a great job with this poem i liked it good luck to you in the contest with other contestants
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hmmm sounds like the many things that have happened to me, good one! well done.
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