Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Steady Ground

For a while now, I've been calling you my earth,
the steady ground I walk easy upon
Solid, unshakeable, a sweet gravity
that pulls me back down when I'm so far gone

But I laid my head against the earth,
and I could hear its heartbeat
Alive, and all its strength is delicate
It can quake, it can crumble, it can die under my feet

When I'm having an earthquake of my own,
you're the rock that I grab onto
But rocks can break, so I'll be careful
to be kind to the earth and gentle with you

Author notes

Just my take on the theme of earth, I guess.

I'm Shadow Fairy of Twi.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Ink4Blood
    July 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Please put your username in the author notes


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    amazing, that is what i think amazing, creative and clever, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest