Walking in the dark,
All alone,
In this graveyard.
I find a cross,
I stand in front of it.
The mist surrounds me,
I hear a noise.
"Who's there?"
I whisper.
No one,
Just the wind.
The trees close in,
Surrounding me.
C
L
O
S
E
R
Somebody appears,
With a knife,
They come to me,
They cut me to pieces,
And I am still there,
In front of that,
Cross.
Author notes
www.coolchaser.com/DarkFairies <-- pic credit.
This poem, is pretty much, a poem about the girl, my own take on it though. Hope you enjoy it!
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~Make Peace, Not War~
A contest entry
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800 points, ended July 18, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Nice, deathafing, but nice.
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A spooky write. The ending was kind of surprising, too. I didn't expect someone to cut her into pieces... Great take one the prompt.
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WOW...again!
I love this pic and you wrote such a lovely piece I don't think I could have written it better!It was just wow...such talent at such a young age
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Oh my goodness
So spooky this write is it actually gave me a chill
you did very well on this piece with the prompt
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Great format and imagery. thanks and good luck.
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WOW! I love the word CLOSER in the middle of the poem, it tied it all together. The picture relates nicely to this piece. One of my faves, great write!
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Wow
Strong write. I enjoyed this poem. Lovely picture at the top. I like your style of writing. It's dark and saddening, yet you're aware of it. Beautiful work.
Warmest of love,
Mylee -
That's really good
I love the picture too. It's a great take on the prompt
I seemt too have come across your poems a few times today
Probably should add you as a fav
Hope you do well with your entry!
Claire x
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