Listen deeply,
detect what eyes neglect.
Lids closed, mind focused,
become intimate
with Unicorn sounds-
They'll come uttering
telltale songs...
Author notes
Prompt: Upon closer look... ~ 20 Words Exactly ~ Image Credit: http://www.deviantart.com/print/1579396/ In order to SEE a Unicorn, one must learn to HEAR them first... Do you wonder now, how many YOU may have missed...???
A contest entry
- 20 words on... by notorious.
789 points, ended July 9, 15 entries
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I sure got a different take on this picture-can you believe i totally missed the fantasy angle?hahah congrats on the gold-as you can tell I'm catching up on some of my favs-
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Wow, I love this!!
You didn't make me listen deeply (since I couldn't hear somebody saying those words), but you made me READ deeply, and that's good enough for me. =D
"detect what eyes neglect."
Brilliant...and it seems to rhyme, unintentionally or intentionally...
"becoming intimate with Unicorn sounds"
Oh, I should try that!! Ahaha, great line.
Your ending is fabulous...thank you for entering. -
I love the opening line of "Listen Deeply"
"detect what eyes neglect" Great way of putting this action of being aware of ALL of your surrounding, detecting like a radar!
"becoming intimate
with Unicorn sounds- " Makes me delve into the idea of Unicorn sounds
... I inhale... Ahhh, Exhale... there they are
All my best dear Ithica!
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Very lovely... such strong images... wonderful flow...
best of luck!
Ken
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Great job...i loved this so much...the words just pour out and its quite simply amazing...great job
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