shrill notes
the bow is a blur
back and forth
what was once a beautiful maine
now worn strings
notes too fast
notes too high
he tries
but the orchastra's too strong
so like every man
the boy is overwhelmed
Author notes
The truth is that no matter how much work life will be difficult
A contest entry
- The truth about life and all the lost morals standards no longer used in society. by darrylblacksr.
600 points, ended July 20, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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How cool, I've always wanted to learn how to play a string instrument... but never got the chance
"so like every man
the boy is overwhelmed"
Quite sad really
But best of luck with your entry ^^
Claire x -
Life has always been difficult but sometimes we were told that it was easy and truthfully it was nothing but a lie... Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest...
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