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Innocence

The innocence i once had,
Has disappeared...
Along with the quickly faded
Feelings i had for you!
I'm left with shattered dreams,
I lie here numb with broken promises,
...And....Cut up arms.
I look forward to seeing the blood
Run from my wrists down my arms...
Dripping onto the Ice, Cold tile floor.
Along with the tears running down my pale face.
I create a silhouette of a lonely girl,
Longing to be in her mothers arms once again.
I'm scared to be alone.
The temptation is ever so near.
The torment of your cold touch,
Drains the life right out of me.
I'm a mixed up soul,
That will never be understood,
Never will be found forgiving,
From the torture you put me through.
Till my long lost future will return...
I will continue to bleed.

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  • AddictiveTRUTH
    July 8, 2008

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    Deep

    emotions in this piece. I must admit that many readers can relate with this.

    Thank you entering, and best of luck in the contest.

    -e


  • Kristinmw
    July 7, 2008

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    I love this

    Your poem is just so realistic--something that people can relate to. I love your poem because it is something that sounds what I could relate to