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true romance

you hold me close
securly holding on
to every second
we have until dawn

your lips carress my cheek
my smile reappears
i start to close my eyes
as they fill with tears

you lead the dance
holding me with ease
i start to sigh
for you know how to please

my lips touch yours
moving in time
with the beautiful tune
your love is sublime

i rest my heavy head
on your warm chest
your heart beating
no different than the rest

i start to get drowsy
you carry me to my bed
you hum a lullaby
easing my sleepy head

i now wonder
if that was love
but now i realize
it was a gift from above

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my dream guy is supposed to do this so, yeah

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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 8, 2008
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    Sweet write
    Love in every line

    Lynda


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Awwww *sighs* How cute sweetie ^^ I could imagine this happening hehehe

    Loving the end;
    "i now wonder
    if that was love
    but now i realize
    it was a gift from above "

    Gorgeous darls
    Love mum xx