I see you pulling away
I notice the distance
I wonder why things are turning in the wrong direction
You shut down...shut yourself from the world...from me
You hide your true feelings
You have become easily aggravated and so annoyed at useless things
You scream and yell to get your point across...even when there is no point behind your words
You call out hurtful words and names and seem not to care what damage they do
You ignore the many CONCERNED phone calls
You'd rather hang out with your friends drinking and smoking instead of being with me
You break promise after promise
You say you love me...In love with me
You say you want me to be happy
That you care what happens to me
That you'll always be there for me
But lately your words along with your actions cannot be trusted
I don't know what to do
Yes I love you but I cannot and will not jeopordize my happiness for you
I will recieve the many blessings that I have headed my way
I will no longer deprive myself of the love and joy thats knocking at my door
So goodbye!
And grow up...please
Life is Life
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Like the last line. How many relationships have I ended with little boys trying to pretend to be men? It's so sad. Your words hit the mark every time. But like me, it's good to see that you can create poetry out it. Great piece. - cgirl0410
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Alsome bravo
wonder why things are turning in the wrong direction
You shut down...shut yourself from the world...from me
You hide your true feelings
You have become easily aggravated and so annoyed at useless things
You scream and yell to get your point across...even when there is no point behind your words
You call out hurtful words and names and seem not to care what damage they do
You ignore the many CONCERNED phone calls
You say you love me...In love with me
You say you want me to be happy
That you care what happens to me
That you'll always be there for me
But lately your words along with your actions cannot be trusted
I don't know what to do
Yes I love you but I cannot and will not jeopordize my happiness for you
I will recieve the many blessings that I have headed my way
I will no longer deprive myself of the love and joy thats knocking at my door
This poem is beautiful I can really and totally relate to this poem that u have done here it great poem with full of emotions and heart.. Great job I understand how u feel with this poem sis I wish i had alot of aplauds to give u cause this poem is amazin and bravo.. this poem i really spoke for me too.. and what I am going through. once again sis alsome job pls keep da ink flowing love reading ya poems. How u doing? I am doing good jus haning in there.. well once again great job....
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So touching. You are blessed with a gift for words. This is a heart-ripping piece but well written. Pen on...
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woah, i dated someone like this but that was a few years ago, i am married now but i know what you went through.
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AWWWWWW
That sounds like me at times(not the girl part) I guess i'm not the only one that feels that way
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yeah there are alot of ppl that feel that way
thanks for the comment, its greatly appreciated
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This is very sad
I hope things work out for you my friend. Though it does seem like you've made a decision and appear strong in your conviction, it probably stills hurts and for that I'm sorry, but like you wrote you got to move on so the best of life and what it has to offer , I wish for you!
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