This department store
has the cutest boys
There is one in particular
~ohh la la~
I picked a few items
to try on for size
Although it was he
~I wanted to put on~
Poking my head out
I said, I need assistance
Can you come in here
~Cum in here, was right~
When he entered the room
he seen me in nothing
my cock full and hard
~Aiming to please~
First, he was surprised
and then on his knees
with no hesitation at all
~He wanted me, too~
I bit down on my lip
to keep from moaning
This was a first, for me
~Baby boy is a pro~
Another hot salesman
was looking for this one
when I called out, he's in here
~and I am in him~
The other guy opened the door
evil grin, as he pulled out his cock
put it in my hand, then started to stroke
~Best damn customer service~
I shot off my load, he took it all
the other was about to explode
and I knelt down to receive it
~Gimme that load, sweety~
He came so hard in my mouth
I thought I was going to choke
This was a very hot afternoon
~There sales tactic worked~
...I maxed out my credit card...
A contest entry
- Adults... Kinky by Riftkin.
1400 points, ended July 20, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good job! Love your poem....
Now where is this store? LOL!
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thank you for entering my contest Riftkin
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i love this it was hot!!!!!!!!!!!! my god your good
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This is really good love it! Hot!!!!!
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you killed me with this hon you did a great job in my queen contest dammit i should have partied with you guys i will sure do so the next party she throws i loved this you did a great job
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SMOKIN HOTTT!
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Interesting way to max out that credit card...This isn't my sort of thing reading poems about gay men...it was ok! Though...funny to a point! ~Sie
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Hahahaha, shit this is fuckin awesome.
I really don't know what to think! But you definitely are good at just "coming" straight out and saying something.
This one was pretty fucked up, but then again I'm really fucked up and like poetry that's different and pushes boundaries. So needless to say I'll be "coming" back to read more of your future work, and you delivered the poetic load quite well. "ooooooh, baby." -
ummm lmao not quite sure what to say here hehe - what happened to girls? LMAO
interesting write hun, fun, made me giggle
good luck
Tasha
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I like to write something extreme sometimes...those days of bi-curious times have to come in to play every now and then...
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well hey no fair - i could play with 2 boys hehe
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