I've done this all before.
The "I love you",
"I'll never leave you".
And I've herd every single,
"Forever".
We "love",
We cry,
We say goodbye.
And every time we say,
"This one is different".
"This time its real",
"This is the one".
So we "love",
We cry,
And we say goodbye.
Just looking for forever...
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I ment to take this in a diffrent direction but this is how it ended up.
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Love the flow
And, I love you.
And this IS forever
Annnd, I cant sleep -
i like this a lot becouse it's real to true we all love trust get crushed and then do it all again good stuff
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You are a strange person to try and read. I'm doubting anythings wrong but I'm picking up your lack of trust in love that still lingers as a result of Tony. Remember you need to talk I'm here call text w/e you know I'll answer if I hear it
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I really like this one. I'm sure many can relate. Well done!
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this was kind of trite to me...I understand what you're trying to convey, I know the feeling well but I just wasn't feeling this
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yea this one sucks horribly but hey what ever. Thanks for your comment.
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Hey
I've done this all before.
The "I love you",
"I'll never leave you".
And I've herd every single,
"Forever".
We "love",
We cry,
We say goodbye.
And every time we say,
"This one is different".
"This time its real",
"This is the one".
Hey this poem is great. I love reading ure work. U have great poetry and its marvelous. I understand totally how U feel with this I feel the excat same way.I have heard it all too an seems to me nothing changes its the same ol words ya know. I have jus had lot on my mind includin this but I hangin in there I jus have learned now to let it be and see what happens now.. cause its so much that bein happenin in the past couple of weeks and things bein said I dont know wut to say or how to react to it..bu enways Great job with this poem U did a marvelous job Bravo Bravo..
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