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Please excuse my blush

"Why are you blushing"

I answered

""Please excuse my cry, my blush
for love I have learned and lost
this blush that morn had stole in skies
what I pant is of heaven's breathe
the warmth of my tears blows the air
were calm have not met
a lamb that meek and mare
but a lamb that naighs for she can't speak
so the beauty as like a heartbeat
I, a bird the world he barks at it
she can't fly her wings even in the sunset
suprisingly you've found my blush here
and then you have drew out some tears
eyes of lilies, hair of care
I have a home inside, pleasant
but a dwelling that only I am in
in my goddess radiance song
I've been dying here quite long
A blush astounding came far
I, once in this star
No love, please excuse my blush
love blossomed this much!"
























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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry in our contest for Rhyme and Flow. Although your poem is an interesting read, it is not a rhyming poem...Sue and Jeff