Does he serriously
love me?
Does he serriously
care for me?
Does he serriously
want to hold me?
Does he serriously
want me?
Does he serriously
think I am over him?
Does he serriously
love her?
Does he serriously
think trying to make me jelouse?
Does he serriously
know it is working?
Does he serriously
just want to be friends?
Does he serriously
know anything?
Does he serriously
think I'll take no for an awnser?
Does he serriously
know that I am falling for him again?
Does he serriously
know I write about him all the time?
Is he serriously
thinking about me at this exat moment?
A contest entry
- -♥-~*Beautiful*~-♥- by xwarriorXprincessx.
900 points, ended August 18, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Right or wrong - I think I still love you. (Forbidden love) by fake-or-real-smile.
850 points, ended February 1, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I liked this.
It's exactly the same questions most girls ask themselves.
Well done, thanks for entering and just a little tip - check your spelling
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Optin you chose is needed in your A/N.
It DOES say I'll DQ you if you don't do this but I'm feeling nice.
Message me when it's done with the title of your poem and I'll comment again. -
nice work there spunky i like how you wrote this one
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aw. this make-a me sad.
it's incredibly sweet that you chose "him" to be the topic of your beautiful poem. that's very cute. it made me smile and wanna cry at the same time.
nicely written. just a couple of spelling errors.
best wishes and best of luck in the contest!
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