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Bloody Mary

Darkness swirls storm
Hell opens gates
Night strangles the air
Mist blows stale breaths
..Resurrects bloody Mary
From the shadows beneath
To bathe in the sweetness of revenge
…drink life

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Picture inspired - [www.coolchaser.com/DarkFairies]

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  • Ephiphany
    July 8, 2008
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    I loved this

    thank you for entering and good luck.
    -e


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 8, 2008

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    creepy, you did a fantastic job on this too my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

  • dillpickle62
    July 7, 2008

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    wow!

    This is verrrry good! Got a wow out of me at the finish. "...drink life" ew! Best wishes in the contest.