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Stitches for the Elderly Suicide.

A fictional fixation
of psychedelic colours,
that bleed for those in waiting,
and those who are pregnant.

A car crash for the lovers
and a thimble for their sores.

A fictional goodbye
is painful and never-ending,
it's a pity, much like the children
who only see in grey, envy those on LSD.

An accidental fire for the lovers
and a thimble for their worst burns.

Don't wish for things that never were,
or you shall die by your lonesome.

Don't wish for things that were
or you will die without a thimble.

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One question, why left align?

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  • PerfectImperfection
    July 29, 2008
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    Because I like things aligned to the left! lol

    This is a very interesting piece of thought. Random reasonings penned in abstract method, leaving one to ponder... I really enjoyed these lines:

    "A fictional fixation
    of psychedelic colours,
    that bleed for those in waiting"

    Unique detail and thought. Thank you for your entry!