Watching the past through specks of stained glass vision
Memories etched upon eyelids blinking incisions
Fetching smiles that draw portraits with images blurred
Hiding cries under a casket of bitter filled words
Feelings fold like acrobats and crash heavy as the tide
Questions bloom like flowers as two peoples past’s collide
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I am so glad to see you posting something
Really have missed reading your words.
The flow and word choices of this are superb and you Deliver without flaw...
☼Becky☼
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glad to see you...wow...thought i lost you in the webs pages for a minute...lol! well done 'write' here. flows fluidly. love that first line...smooth wording here! "Watching the past through specks of tained glass vision" love that wordplay. the whole piece is thought penned well! i can not wait to here more from you. listen you, you had better hit me up! we still have a few collabs to do! lol...glad to see you once again!
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this is like a stuffed sausage of a poem.
A tight container packed with meat.
Good meat, spicy meat of course.
tasty!
How ya been?
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Thank you for your comment, I have been kind of MIA lately,..hope to find more time soon, I have lots of cathcing up to do!!!
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Really sad!
Sometimes the things we leave behind creep up behind us! Lives are more mixed, more hurt and distrust. The heart can be deceived, but it also will, tell the tale, in the end. I have missed you, mind racing. Are you OK? The Shaker
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Thank you for your sweet words, I am alive just been sooooo busy
I have missed everyone and certainly missed writing..nice to hear from you, hope all is well, I know I have lots of catching up to do with everyone work!!!
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You clearly..
haven't missed a beat in your writings! excellent piece, flow..intact; rhyme onpoint! story like usual
involving! great to have you back my friend!
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This is a nice piece my friend. Short and to the point. I love the rhyming and imagery here. I'm glad to see you posting again. Keep on wriring.
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