Recreational love
turned to obsession
…to addiction.
Abandoned,
I survive…
…a pain junkie
living in a deserted
heart.
Author notes
I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin
Prompt: what ever you desire
Photo Credit: Rosemary__s_Heart_by_HoboInHollywood.jpg (www.deviantart.com)
18 words
A contest entry
- Just 18 Words To Make Me Shock by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended July 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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whew! deeply taunts here i like this i think you did
a very great job with this here contest thanks for entering take care
1up*
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awww this is sad...nobody likes to be a pain junkie
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I agee!
In your brevity you speak volumes. Seems open ended with the possibility of multiple meanings. I like that, giving readers the chance to make their own intrepretation. The pain of emotional solitude can be a junkie's delight. Thanks for the read.
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bravo bravo!!!! you have done a wonderful job! the imagery and emotion was just so vivid and true.. I can soo very much relate to this.. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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Oh! Was that only 18 words?! Well done.
So much said in so few, very intense image painted. Best of luck in the contest.
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