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Whole Again

Missing image
Lost within death's anxiety
ranting graveside;
love laid stiff, cold.
Denying celebration
from dark etchings
of his vile soul.
Turning my back, walking
away I rejoice
freedom making me
whole.....

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30 words

Until death do they part....

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    July 9, 2008

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    great take on the prompt. really expressed yourself so well with those few words. i really liked it a lot! wish you the best in the contest too.


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 7, 2008

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    Very intersting way to take that picture. I really enjoyed this a lot. I think you are very talented, good luck in the contest. I bet you will do great =) Keep on writing, till you can't no more!

    xXDCXx

    ~Make Peace, Not War~


  • Ephiphany
    July 7, 2008

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    Incredible

    imagery for this Pic. I enjoyed the feelings protrayed in this, thank you and good luck in the contest.
    -e