I sink
unstoppable,
no hands
to sustain
this heavy
burden.
My winds
turned away,
the air is
chilly and dry.
I carry
shame
to the abyss
for all eternity,
alone.
Author notes
Romancing the wind is utter foolishness and failing is disaster.
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Thank you again for entering.This was a strong read as I enjoyed your words and the way the story spelled out.
LEL
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The air of this peice is haunting.Leaves all ends untied and baffels me.Pretty amazing to be able to do that.Nice Work! Good luck
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Powerful write, Allan. I liked the last stanza the best.
It conveyed powerful emotion and seemed to express a feeling of loneliness. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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As far as I can tell, you are afraid of spending your entire life with no accomplishments. Well I don’t think that’s true this poem isn’t like you. To me it seems defeatist. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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It is a prompt of your worst fears. That's the idea I think...
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Bleak, sad, great imagery.
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Thankey. How come nobody asks for my best fears? Much more interesting, kinky, too.
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OK, I'll be the one
What are your best fears? (no word limit) -
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That hundreds of beautiful women will force me against my will to chose my top 50, that will dote on me for the rest of my natural life. What a bitch deciding those last 3 or 4 positions would be!
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Very interesting ,
UM, don't count on getting much sleep, OH! and, you should be more careful, might bring out a stalker or two! hehehe D. -
lol
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