i dont know what its like anymore
trying to be me
somewhere this person has gotten lost
on her journey to being free
staying strong to win this fight
the one from long ago
how can i win if they've gone away
my mind just wants to blow
she faught so hard til i cried the blues
then laughed when she died in vain
they were the ones who lied to succeed
while playing a bitter game
so my heart stands still once again
lost in the moment of now....
bitter hate grows on the ivy of my viens
kiss the lips of the winter cold
through the blizzard of obstacles she rides
closing the gate as reality unfolds.
**unfinished**
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I think this is a complete work. I feel the emotions spilled onto the page, and the reality of life that often tilts the playing field. An excellent writ here poet. I wouldn't change a thing.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Perfect
I think that this is perfect just as is. everything has an even flow and there is a beginning, a middle and an end.
Yvonne
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Closing the gates as reality unfolds! Can't wait to see the ending to this poem. Amazing so far my dear friend! ~Sie
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