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Summer Pleasures

Cool evenings
with setting sun,
Active birds
chirping around,
Gentle breeze
making the evenings
as wonderful as ever,
Crowded swimming pools,
wealthy beeches,
lucky ice cream vendors,
And yes,
The tasty mangoes
do make my summer
unforgettable.

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  • Alyzeh
    October 21, 2008

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    True about the summer! I like the laid back feel to this one. I miss summers too! Sigh! Can't wait until summer 2009! Hehe

    Oh and btw, you wrote 'beeches', that would be beaches!

    Typos, we are all human!

  • Roy-rahbar
    July 16, 2008
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    Warm experience.

    Hello Aaliya..a interesting poem.
    Roy-rahbar.


  • corrupt angel
    July 10, 2008

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    This was just so sweet. It painted a perfect picture of summer. Every line was amazing. Great write.